It’s a Mist! It’s a Bat! It’s a . . . Vampire! - Revision & Edit

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Across
  1. 2. In the phrase “otherwise died prematurely,” this word improves precision by clearly describing timing of death.
  2. 3. In the final sentence, this word improves clarity when revising “shows no signs of dying.”
  3. 4. In the description of the ekimmou, this verb clearly explains what the spirit attempts to do after draining life.
  4. 7. In revising for precision, this word names the region where early vampire-like myths originated.
  5. 10. In the sentence about the ekimmou, this word would most effectively replace “angry” to create stronger tone.
  6. 12. When revising for formal tone, this word supports the description of Dracula as “polite” and “poised.”
  7. 14. This noun from the passage would improve clarity when revising the phrase “the myths of vampires” to sound more formal.
Down
  1. 1. This word from the passage would best replace “stories” when revising for a more academic tone.
  2. 3. In the concluding paragraph, this verb shows what the idea of vampires continues to do to readers.
  3. 5. To maintain formal tone, this word is more precise than “weird” when describing vampire appearances.
  4. 6. In revising for precise characterization, this word best describes the greedy person whose spirit becomes a gaki.
  5. 8. In the sentence about differing vampire tales, this verb most precisely replaces “are not the same.”
  6. 9. To eliminate redundancy in the sentence about chupacabra “incidents,” replace the repeated phrase with this word.
  7. 11. The most effective conjunction to combine two contrasting ideas about vampires in film versus legend.
  8. 13. When combining the sentences about Dracula and vampire myths, this comparative word clarifies the time relationship.